Score: 5

"not much to the game"

submission: Sexy Balloon Pop 232

date: 8 hours ago

but the girl is nice. And I do like the simplicity of it.

Can I download her instead?

Score: 8

"Do More!"

submission: Peter and The NG Office

date: 8 hours ago

Nice...

First suggestion that came to mind was yoeu should activate the obstacles so that they can actually hurt your guy. I was just running through stuff that ought to have killed me.

You should definitely create more games. Goes without saying.

Score: 0

"hahaha LOL"

submission: Twilight Kisses

date: 17 hours ago

I just dig your english man. How about cracking open a textbook? You obviously can write code well enough and I doubt actionscript 2 or 3 is your primary language. So I have no doubt you are capable of learning english.

It reflects so incredibly poorly on a game artist when his work is ok but the english is like something you'd read in a nigerian 409 scammers email. This is not to be insulting -- It just boggles my mind that you guys cannot take the time to at least have a native speaker check your dialoguE!!!

"Bella and Edwards loves each other and got time to Romance.." LOL LOL LOL

Thank you for the comic relief!

Score: 0

"your game failed to load"

submission: Runaway

date: 17 hours ago

hung at 99%. I gave up after 2 minutes.

Score: 8

"it was all right"

submission: Mafia 2 - 1940

date: December 22, 2009

I think it definitely requires some polish - fix the spelling and grammatical errors, maybe the fact that I didn't look at part I made the storyline a bit unclear but it was cool and I played all the way through - which is unusual for me with respect to a flash game these days.

but definitely do fix the spelling and grammatical errors. They are very distracting in the sense that you want your players to be immersed in the game and when they are laughing at sloppy spelling and grammatical errors it takes them outside of it.

Good work!

Score: 7

"yup"

submission: Dodecahedron Test

date: December 20, 2009

the guy below captured my thoughts exactly. I think its what you set out to do and its a nice demo of your skills. i would nix the sliding transitions though - they are distracting and actually annoying. Like when you select 'stop motion' it should just stop... not slide off the screen, slide back on, and then stop.

Score: 8

"the game lags and throws"

submission: Hopyon

date: December 20, 2009

type errors every now and then. The lag is real - my computer is fast.

Otherwise it is a very solid piece of work.

Score: 0

"its merits are technical at best"

submission: Punch a Bitch

date: December 20, 2009

try submitting under the correct category next time. This is a game. Its not a movie.

This kind of stuff doesn't really offend me. I think it is stupid and immature but don't believe you really advocate beating your b--t-h or that your players are that impressionable.

What really gets me is this: if I had spelled out the whole word up there, you know, the b---ch word, this review would have been deleted. In fact, it takes for less to get a reveiw deleted than a supposedly offensive flash.

This is more a comment on ng's stupid review deletion system than on your equally stupid flash but ...

end of rant

Score: 9

"Cute game!"

submission: Lucky Chakra

date: December 20, 2009

I liked this alot. Very very nice art!

Only one suggestion: add some milk of mag in case Lucky's Muladhara chakra should get blocked.

Score: 4

"nice"

submission: Speed Ball Pusher

date: December 19, 2009

but touches a big pet peeve for me: place the instructions in game. And place the ads outside the game if you need to deface your work with them at all.

Otherwise, I like the game for its simplicity. And it looks like you did exactly what you set out to do...